Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.
(Meme stolen from
verbal_kint,
topaz_eyes, and
queenzulu)
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Date: 2009-09-08 01:04 am (UTC)DEE, HOW DO YOU DO IT? The scene in Central Park with the horse, the mistaken identities, House's long-lost sister, Wilson falling in love ... you kept all these balls (no pun intended, despite the NC-17 story rating) in the air so beautifully. I loved it.
*mems*
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Date: 2009-09-08 02:34 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-09-08 01:19 am (UTC)I mean, when Sheppard walks into the bathroom and sees House's cane? Hot damn, man.
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Date: 2009-09-08 11:29 pm (UTC)That Rum Tum Tugger is a curious beast
My disobliging ways are a matter of habit
If you offer me fish, then I always want a feast
When there isn't any fish, then I won't eat rabbit
If you offer me cream, then I sniff and sneer
For I only like what I find for myself
So you'll catch me in it right up to my ears
If you put it away on the larder shelf
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Date: 2009-09-08 02:12 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-09-08 02:30 am (UTC)I still don't get the part about the banana and the donkey, though.
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Date: 2009-09-08 02:31 am (UTC)Every time I see an iPhone now I giggle.
P.S. In spite of myself, you make me like Cameron! Who knew she'd be the Worst Patient Ever?
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Date: 2009-09-08 02:41 am (UTC)And the sexing at the end! WHOOOOO HOT.
I must...go reread it. Heh.
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Date: 2009-09-08 02:44 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2009-09-08 04:33 am (UTC)You have a special talent for creating a full picture out of such little fragments, and that last FOR SALE ad made it all worthwhile.
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Date: 2009-09-09 09:49 am (UTC)I especially like how you got House out of the room just in time to stop Wilson finding out the secret, but apart from that my favourite bit is the camel.
*mems as usual*
(This is a horrid meme - it's a bit like an exam question, and those always cause my brain to go OMG I CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING MY MIND HAS GONE TOTALLY BLANK D: lol)