This looks awesome

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HELLO, ANONYMOUS!  I am happy with criticism but would prefer dialogue, so if you'd identify yourself that'd be great!  (PS. Don't read "Leave in Quiet" because you really won't like that one.)

This doesn't work one bit, you really don't seem to have a clue on how BDSM relationships work in RL or this AU. The point of Cameron in aris_writing's AU is that Cameron is a sub pretending to be a dom & House is the dom-est dom around. No way would House ever behave like this or Cameron for that matter, because she's ALWAYS subed to him. Even if you're not using that AU but a straight BDSM, House can't defend any claim against Wilson if he's uncollared without Wilson's public acknowledgement, which is missing here - Wilson must have given Cameron consent for her actions - she can't touch without a sub's consent, and there's no way he would have if House had a prior claim. And there's no way House would have made a claim against Cameron unless he were authorized to do so - no dom would ever behave like that, least of all someone with the kind of self-control & lack of fear House has. To suggest House would be afraid of Cameron is completely ludicrous.

Do you actually write anything original? It seems that the last half dozen things you've written have all been derivative off of other people's work.

( Some initial thoughts of mine to kick us off )

And, now that you point it out, almost everything I've written has been derivative, seeing as how it's fanfic.  What do you think I should write instead?