Itching (NC-17) / Un-see (NC-17)

[deelaundry]

Last two from Stump the Writer.  This was such a great meme - thanks to everyone who played with me.

These are completely unrelated but both DARK.  Warning on both for implied violence and language.

layne67 stumped me with He was gone before she could say a word.(That Time Cameron Had Mono) and requested something from 'My Fathers' Son' about the time when Wilson got beaten.

Itching, NC-17 for language, 216 words:

Chuck hated his cunt of a mother for many, many reasons, but one of them was that she gave him the name Francis and never bothered to tell him it was a pussy name. So he walked into kindergarten completely unaware and got his nose bloodied the very first day.

Cunt.

He'd learned to fight well, hard and nasty but with honor, and had settled on Chuck as his real first name by third grade. The fights tapered off then until junior high, when guys started to get hair on their nuts and being different was the worst possible sin. He'd honed his skills then, learned how to inflict the most pain or the most humiliating pain, how to leave marks and how not to.

When Larry, piss-drunk on Everclear, proposed that they go find themselves some towel-heads to teach a lesson to, and Todd nodded and added, "Or fags," Chuck found himself nodding too. He didn't give a shit if people came from a different country, and what a guy wanted to do with his prick was his own damn problem. He had no feelings one way or the other about who.

But it had been a long time since the crunch and splatter had rung in his ears, and his knuckles were positively itching.


karaokegal stumped me with "Where are you going?" (Just Short of a Bottle of Makers Mark and a Shotgun) and asked for Foreman-centric.

Un-see, sequel to Leave in Quiet (also created from a karaokegal prompt), DARK, R, 249 words:

Foreman's seen it, with his own eyes, and he can't un-see it.

It has no relevance to his life whatsoever -- House quickly proved oh so conclusively how unrelated the real world is to what Foreman saw -- but he can't shut the pictures off.

He saw the full-motion, live-action real thing, but what his brain spits back to him, at unpredictable intervals, are still photos.

He's in the lab with Cameron. She beckons him over to the microscope; he bends, settles his eyes, and instead of cells, he sees Wilson with his fist cocked, knuckles already bloody.

He's in the diagnostics conference room, sitting back and smirking at the ridiculous path Chase and Cameron have gone down in this differential. House snaps an insult and drags a marker across the whiteboard, slashing a thick black line that becomes the vivid red stripe up House's side, puffed out from his pale skin and dotted with pinpricks of blood.

He's in his bed, relaxed, music lightly playing and his eyes shut against the world. He's beginning to float, on the edge of the universe, and there's the head of House's cock, peeking out from under Wilson's shoe-clad right foot, which is planted in House's groin.

He's walking into the hospital. Cuddy greets him courteously, professionally, and hands him a file to review. He flips to the middle, to review the test results she's indicating, and the lines on the graph resolve into House's face. Content, adoring, blissful, happy.

Foreman can't un-see it.

Comments

[nightdog-barks.livejournal.com]

Foreman’s seen it, with his own eyes, and he can’t un-see it.

YIKES! I must be so sick ... I love this.

[deelaundry.livejournal.com]

I wrote it, so what does that make me? I keep thinking about Wilson's french leather loafer in House's groin - that's got to be painful, even with a minimum of force/weight on it. Thanks!

[nightdog-barks.livejournal.com]

It makes you creative, and talented, and all those other wonderful things.

Hell, you should see some of the stuff I have under lock and key.

[deelaundry.livejournal.com]

Can I?

[daisylily.livejournal.com]

Ooh, ewww! ;P

I like both of these a lot, but in a cowering-in-a-corner-whimpering kind of way. As I've mentioned before, I love the way that your OCs are always real people, even when they're horrible real people.

[nightdog-barks.livejournal.com]

Hold on a sec ... I'll copy something up and open it only to you. A few other people have seen it but it won't have their comments on it.

It's from the Bad Company ficverse, and I'll put some warnings on it so you can decide if you want to read it or not.

[nightdog-barks.livejournal.com]

It's up, noted as being custom-locked to you only.

[secondsilk.livejournal.com]

Oh, god, Forman.
And Chuck.
Shocking, both of them, and very well done.

[deelaundry.livejournal.com]

Yes, these two were definitely on the seamier side. I feel very, very bad for Foreman, who never wanted to get anywhere near involved in that. Thanks.

[(Anonymous)]

i have nothing but love for this and if that means im sick then i'll happily accept a t-shirt and join the club. im here to stay ;)

so how/when did foreman find out? *very curious*

--Neli, lurker of note

[nemesishamartia.livejournal.com]

I'm not big on the House-as-sub thing (never mind having written it), esp not so deep in the BDSM world, but you made it so, so believable. So wonderfully believable.

And I wanna know, too, how Foreman found out. /nods.

Excellently done. Thanks!

Nems

[deelaundry.livejournal.com]

Thanks. This (and "Leave in Quiet") are all about House and Wilson taking things to an opposite extreme. I figure for House it's like jumping out of an airplane, like a shot of morphine... a total letting-go of everything. For Wilson, it's about letting his emotions take him over. Neither of them are really in control here, which is what makes it scariest to me.

(I don't know how Foreman found out, exactly. Wilson is very secretive about the times they "do this," so it must have been Foreman breaking into House's apartment for some reason.)

[nemesishamartia.livejournal.com]

I guess I can see that.

Hm... Would you mind it if I wrote a fic about Foreman finding out? I have some ideas... Of course, if you say no, I'll totally understand.

Nems

[deelaundry.livejournal.com]

Sure; I'd find it interesting to see what you'd write.

[nemesishamartia.livejournal.com]

I have just one question. What's this "Stump the writer?"
Thanks
Nems

[deelaundry.livejournal.com]

"Stump the Writer" is a meme where you invite people to quote lines from your stories, then you have to guess which story it's from. My post for the meme was here: http://deelaundry.livejournal.com/40341.html

[nemesishamartia.livejournal.com]

So, benjimmy and I (I hope you don't mind the coauthoring thing) have been working on it, and we're wondering if you would do beta-ing honors, partly because it's based off your fic and partly because you know what you're getting into reading this.

If no, we totally understand, of course.

And I really must thank you for this. I am having so much fun with this fic... which probably makes me really perverted, but...
Nems

[deelaundry.livejournal.com]

Sure. I'm not always the fastest with betas but I'd be happy to give it a look. You can email it to me at deelaundry at yahoo dot com.

Glad you're having fun.

[nemesishamartia.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'll email it as soon as we finish it.