I couldn't get it back as written. I've tried to re-write it but it's not as concise as the first time. I've gotten most of the original points but lost some. And then there is the whole going off on tangents thing. I had to erase a lot. If you want it I'll send it to you. Understand please, I'm still trying to achieve mediocre.
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Date: 2008-05-20 11:05 am (UTC)