OK, you kill me. I mean, this actually hurts. Like the end of ET.
I take (great name) axmxz's point that maybe it needs some development here and there, but I think that the fact it has sparked such debate is testament to its overall brilliance. I love the detail, I love how literate you clearly are, I hate you a little bit for nearly making me cry at half two in the morning... I was only going to read the first chapter, and to begin with I winced at how tiny the scroll bar was, but now I want more. Stat.
The great thing about this, I think, is that it could almost be a novella unrelated to the show - you'd just have to change a couple of details here and there, as well as names, obviously. That isn't to say that you haven't written H&W in character, it's just so original that it could work by itself. Sorry if this doesn't sound like a compliment... it was an observation.
The temporary reconciliation, though lovely, doesn't make me entirely happy. How will they cope when it all goes back to 'normal'? I can just see it getting all BBM on me. Oy.
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Date: 2006-08-29 01:35 am (UTC)I take (great name) axmxz's point that maybe it needs some development here and there, but I think that the fact it has sparked such debate is testament to its overall brilliance. I love the detail, I love how literate you clearly are, I hate you a little bit for nearly making me cry at half two in the morning... I was only going to read the first chapter, and to begin with I winced at how tiny the scroll bar was, but now I want more. Stat.
The great thing about this, I think, is that it could almost be a novella unrelated to the show - you'd just have to change a couple of details here and there, as well as names, obviously. That isn't to say that you haven't written H&W in character, it's just so original that it could work by itself. Sorry if this doesn't sound like a compliment... it was an observation.
The temporary reconciliation, though lovely, doesn't make me entirely happy. How will they cope when it all goes back to 'normal'? I can just see it getting all BBM on me. Oy.