ext_24981 ([identity profile] poeia.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] deelaundry 2007-07-17 12:43 pm (UTC)

Pillory was one of your few fics that I didn't like on first reading so I almost skipped this. I'm glad I didn't.

There is information here that I think could have benefited the story such as the fact that Cuddy had "achieved" male status. It seemed to me that either inconsistent (some women could talk to men as equals) or that Cuddy was a male in this universe.

I like it better now (although I doubt it will become one of my favorite universes.)

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