http://spoopy.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] spoopy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] deelaundry 2006-08-28 11:06 am (UTC)

This is fantastic. It's believable, simplistically and very effectively done, and the way in which you've written the POV is fantastic -- I felt like I was watching all of this through the eyes of Jack.
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